Welcome to the blog for Prof. John Talbird's English 101 class. The purpose of this site is two-fold: 1) to continue the conversations we start in class (or to start those conversations BEFORE we get to class) and 2) to practice our writing/reading on a weekly basis in an informal forum.

Wednesday, March 18, 2015

Group Critics

      Group critics are pretty interesting and helpful because we get a chance to see some others writings and someone sees mine one too . we get feed back from others and some corrections too. I personally like this because it's give me chance to get different kind of idea from different writing; therefore, sometimes I feel to write like this way and sometimes I feel silly. Today i read one essay by picking up from the table, that was great essay and that's really helped me to think about my essay. Also, some one gave me feedback on my essay and corrected some errors, that helped me. When we do group critics with four or five, face to face that's also helpful but it's bad for my group because most them are lazy. after reading essay everybody say "Yeah, good, add more details" what is this? Is it should be group critics? but i heard from some other group they were discussing deeply and taking time to explain! so i feel my group should be more active and focus............    

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  1. I agree it's interesting for the fact that you can get feedback on your own story and also give feedback and listen to others travel narratives. My groups travel stories were interesting they were about trips to: Nevada, Georgia, and Milwaukee.

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